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“Hello! very pretty drawing, I especially like your use of color in this. As for the facial proportions, the features all look pretty good as is, just make sure you align them with the lines of the per”

“I seem to be unable to edit my submission, but I would like to add that any other feedback would be appreciated as well! I really wanna use this piece as a means to learn from :)”

“Hi Grant! Your mermaid is coming together very nicely already!! Going off your comments on your previous decorations, You want her to feel more intimidating, correct?maybe make the lighting more drama”

“Hi kanna! It’s already coming together very beautifully, the mermaid looks so enchanting! Hmm, as for finishing this, I’d say either go with a sunset or dusk theme. Not only would a foggy air with a l”

“Hello friend!! The drawing is so nice, i love how you drew out their interaction. I would love to help you. My drawover is highly exaggerated in contrast and color , but i mostly did that so you can c”

“Adorable drawing!! Pay attention to your perspective, and that lines going the same way follow the same pespective point to your horizon line. Right now the perspective feels a bit confusing because t”

“Hi friend! To be honest, i think the rendering overall looks really nice and matches perfectly fine, the face could just use a teeny bit of contrast. So i added some minor highlights and shadows to do”

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“hi it looks nice already but to get the effect the ref artists has you need to work on your edge control. all of your edges are soft while the ref artists defining style is their clean shapes with onl”

“Hi there! good job already!. eyes looking sideways are tricky as is. remember the spherical volume of the eye and how the iris looks and how the eye deforms due to it in different angles. Your constru”

“Hi! looking good already. My version is not perfect, i did it rather quickly but main takeaways are: Make sure the light from the torch is warm like the fire is, and a torch doesnt light such a big”

“Good work, you’re really close! make sure all features follow the perspective, that’s the main thing right now. Good luck!”

“Second is the construction, your perspective is a bit inconsistent between the window and the table, which makes the image look flatter. We don’t want that, it would be a shame on such a nice piece!”

“Really cool piece! It looks great already. I will leave you two feedbacks, one regarding construction/perspective and the other regarding the light/color. First, the colors. The ones you picked work w”

“your rendering is so good already! Great use of color as well. I mostly have things to note about the construction/anatomy. The perspective in your drawing is quite inconsistent making some parts look”

“Hey there! Looks really good already. A lot of that is up to personal preference. I added some extra line weight to all lines outside the character, as well as any lines where big shapes overlap small”

“Hi there! Good job on challenging yourself. I can tell from the way you constructed the face you already looked into drawing the volumes of the face. If i were you i would not worry about shading too ”

“Hi there! You’re on the right path, the angle you picked is a really challenging oneto draw! You drew the mouth and nose correctly following the angle, but the eyes not quite yet. this mostly has to d”

“Hi!! That’s so cute! Reading your own comment you said the face looks too masculine due to the shading but if i am being honest i feel this has moreso to do with the facial proportions. The nose to c”

“beautiful piece so far! I reccommend you group your values more. right now less important visual areas like the grass have way too many values. the values on the figure are really good though! i recco”

“Hi, really beautiful work! to be honest, i think the heavy contast on the face is really nice. Maybe you can play around with adding some more more prominent warm hues on the cheeks and lips and some ”

“My feedback is in the image! mostly on the perspective and a little attempt at the drapery. The design looks really cool to me but i don't go there so i can't critique it very well hahaha. love the f”

“Hi friend! your drawing is really nice, your style has a really appealing softness to it. To be honest, the biggest piece of feedback i can give you is to practise with seeing your subject in 3d in yo”

“cool drawing! the interaction is very cute. for my feedback i reduced the camera angle a bit to make it easier to work on. But it seems like you have inconsistent perspective on your drawing, namely t”