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“So essentially just learning face construction and mannequins. also starting to see in 3-D helps a lot so honestly just learning the Loomis method as a start if you haven’t already and then usin”

“So essentially just learning face construction and mannequins. also starting to see in 3-D helps a lot so honestly just learning the Loomis method as a start if you haven’t already and then usin”

“So for silhouette in my opinion the absolute most important thing is shape language detail doesn’t matter if the character isn’t recognizable. So I would suggest trying different shapes for you”

“Oh sorry, one more thing I also noticed is the shoulders are in even.”

“So honestly for one of your first drawings this is actually really good there are some things with the actual construction like the chin and the jaw line being uneven, but that’s all stuff that you ca”

“Assuming the lines are meant to be speed lines, I think it feels a little flat because the ends don’t get thinner so it doesn’t feel like it’s going a specific direction. If they aren’t speed lines th”

“First off, the style is amazing, but I think part of the reason the hair feels off is because the background is white. As for your question about working professionally, I don't think there's enoug”

“So first I’m just going to say this is just an observation I’m sure you probably thought of this already, but from what I can see the character has very vibrant colors compared to the background, Mak”

“So I know my mannequin isn’t great, but essentially something that helps a lot is practicing your mannequins, in different prospectives. Once you start seeing your art in 3D it is a big game changer. ”

“So I first would suggest learn the Loomis method and basic facial construction. I’m not sure if the reference is a stylized photo/drawing but it’s important to learn the basics. And with learning the ”

“I think making the background darker and the character outline will help, mostly because I can’t really see any visual points with your character. My eyes are drawn to the electric type background, so”

“So this is just an opinion, but I think the original has more story behind it. I know the new drawing is a portrait and is more of detail, but it’s also not a bad thing to let drawings be simplified. ”

“So this is just an opinion, but I think the original has more story behind it. I know the new drawing is a portrait and is more of detail, but it’s also not a bad thing to let drawings be simplified. ”