@nekumania

“Rendering and shading can be difficult when beginning. The biggest feedback I can give you is using references. The Astro head is an amazing reference, because it’s simplified. You don’t need to ble”

“You’ve done a good job in terms of anatomy and rendering the gold specially What seemed off to me was that her arms and legs were too thin compared to her overall physique, and her head felt a bit”

“This is a very solid piece you have. The perspective seems to be working fine, and the proportion of the figure are correct. Maybe he needs to be slightly wider. Maybe consider populating the scene. ”

“This is a lovely design. One thing I’ve realized is art directors and clients usually like to see character turnarounds, and expression sheets. Maybe you can add those to your piece and have a bette”

“This is an amazing character design and you rendered her very well. The thing with the sun is it creates strong hard shadows, so I just increased the shadows based on what you already had. The ocean”

“I love how you've rendered things so far. I agree that getting rid of the alligators in the background can help the composition, but you can also desaturate them and push the purple from the backgroun”

“Lovely rendering. Amazing attention to details. Most of the times he light source has a tint to it, and the shadow has a tint reflecting the environment. I added a warm light, a rim light and cool sh”