@fennec84137

“Sorry my paint over isn't the best, I was doing it with my finger, but I think the poses and composition overall are well placed. I think there just needs to be more emphasis on the line of action to”

“Honestly these all look pretty good. I've only done a few hours of gesture drawing myself so take that as you will, but I think what will help you to improve is to try for these same results in a shor”

“Hi, I have to say I love the mood of this entire piece. It really gives that deep sea feeling. My paint over isn't the best, but I found that adding some hard shadows in some areas can help the lighti”