@brooklyn89598

“Im not super familiar with the character but id recommend posing the back legs like this, maybe a touch smaller than how i drew them but im too lazy to go back and fix it again”

“matched your lineless style using a lasso-styled brush tool to do sharp angular shapes”

“- adjusted angleing of the teeth/muzzle - lowered the eyes a little - pinned ears back per dog body language - bristley fur adds to the angry/rabid feel -harder/thicker snarl lines add depth and e”

“the muzzle was just angled a smidge too low! didnt match the angle of the rest of the head you had. super cute art!!”

“I think the biggest things I noticed with your work that could use improvement is your linework and your shading. Your lines and shading consistently seem to overlap/pass over where theyre meant t”