@bamkyre

“Hola Sofía Buenas, no sé si te será de ayuda esto, he intentado darle un poco una vuelta a la imagen y estructurarla como una escena nocturna, para que hagan mas contraste las iluminaciones, se pueda”

“Helloo Solus, I feel like you gave yourself the critique you need. You always want be thinking about your values. I suggest Having in mind the hierarchy of the priorities. Something like: Values ->”

“Hello there Mika, I checked out your work and it's lovely, keep doing more you are doing great. So the main thing I've changed here is the brushwork, You want to make sure you get good transitions ”

“Hello Nelybi, I'll start by saying that the head construction is really good, looks solid, I might have changed the proportions but that's to your liking. That said, I'll suggest you use a bigger b”

“Hey there, I really like your drawing and character, I feel like it mostly looks alright already, but I can see the lighting issue you mentioned, I feel like most times theres a problem with the light”

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“Hey there Jam, I had a try at your drawing, I hope this helps First thing I'll say is that since I did this digitaly, there might be some effects dificult to achieve with a pencil, especially on t”

“Hello there, I had a try at this, I tried not to render the thing that much since you asked for drawing issues, but I think you might benefit a lot if you make the values better too, just so you know ”

“Hello Chi, I'd like to first say this one looks already perfect to me, I'd make sure to just make the shapes on the hair a bit more aesthetic and maybe add some small color variations and cleaner line”

“Hello Yujin, your character is really cool, I like how the drawing looks, I'd say you only need to keep on practicing, study other people's work, you probably already know what you like and what influ”

“Hola Buenas tardes/noches Beatriz, I happen to be spanish too but I'll keep this in english for everybody else jaja. So, what I did here, more than a critique it's an example of a different approac”

“Hey there Gino, I hope this one helps. First thing that caught my eyes was the fact that the ellipses of the kettle seemed off, so I searched for the reference and checked that out, I drew a small ”

“Hey there Addie, I checked your work and It's really lovely, love that korra piece, keep going strong you are doing so good. First of all you should probably tell your sister that she has great tas”

“Hello there, I tried messing around with your painting a bit, hope is well recieved. So, I believe the problem usually isn't the colors not matching in most drawings, that's why instead of changing t”

“Hey there, I tried making some small changes on this one, so first of all I'll say, that you really nailed the skin tone in my opinion. The main issues here are the head structure and proportions, an”

“So... dude, this one is sick, I love so much how it looks, I feel like I can never seem to try and paint something as ambitious and cool as this piece, congrats it looks amazing, I even feel like I am”

“Hi there, your character looks so cool buddy, I tried my best at it hope its helpful. Main things going wrong to me here are, the shapes, I feel like you could try to make bigger grouped shapes mean”

“Overall it looks pretty accurate buddy, theres just a few things going wrong. First and main thing is the proportions were off, make sure when doing studies like this that the measurements are nearly”

“I'd say theres many tiny thing to say about this one, but I'll stick to the most broad and relevant things. -Planes You want to take into account the planes of the face in order to get an accurat”

“First of all, you did amazing here, I love how you threw some blues on the shadows and pinks and turquoise on the lights, overall it works , and you got the bounce lights and reflections alright. The”

“First of all, I think your design is really good, depending on the setting/style I feel like it works really well, at least to me, I feel like mostly what could be a bit better are the forms, and like”

“You already got great critique on this one, but I just think there are a few things more to comment on. Mainly, when doing studies, you want to make the value structure having the same amount of co”