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“Practice cylindrical and spherical forms to better construct the egg shape of the rib cage. You should use guidelines such as the center line or line of action to better align parts of the body so the”

“You should try to use guidelines to help you construct a head better. Study anatomy of the human head can help you learn to exaggerate and caricaturize into anime heads better”

“Adding a bright highlight would be a start since glass is very reflective. Also rendering the hair to be more glossy too would pull off the glass like feeling too.”

“It feels like it could be made more dramatic/the lighting more clearer by making the shadows covering the front more darker. Also the lighting on the gold could be made better by also following the da”

“It feels like the armor on your character's shoulders feel more like stickers than actual pieces of armor/metal wrapping around the shoulders and arms. So the form below the head is off.”

“In all honesty, the whole face is flat due to lack of depth. Start with a sphere to help guide where the head is facing and as a guideline for where facial structures are supposed to wrap around the h”

“Your highlights and shadowsdidn’t seem to make sense with the light source. The highlights should be closer together. Treat hair as if it were simplified forms of ribbons to make more sense of the li”