@revann

“Hellooo('0')/! • i think you're right, the proportion of the neck is odd, it's looking like head is too forward. I suggest pushing neck back • the chin is too sharp, and it looks like the character ”

“Haii hello(^_^♪) I think the values are messed, so i tried to fix them, i found what i think was your reference and tried to adjust values to it. Also your shadow were warm, felted dirty and plain.”

“Hellooo Recommending to divide your art on three parts. Do not put main things of composition into the center, that would make composition more empty. Usually artist put main parts of the art into/ne”

“The angle of the pose seems very wrong to me so i tried to changed it. Recommendations from me - do proportion sketch with simple forms. Also about the hands, it looks like the character ain't grabbi”

“Haii(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠) I have a feeling her waist is too high placed and too thin. Her shoulders are too narrow, shoulders should be ≈ the same size of a head. Also the ankles are a little bit low-set. H”

“Haalo In this design you overdid with the details especially on the legs. The most important parts on vtuber models are going like that: Head> shoulders> torso>legs, because on the streams viewers usu”

“Haii I really recommend you to do different values on art. Lighting up/down character or background to stand out the most important parts. I can see that the most important parts are the character an”