Hellooo('0')/! • i think you're right, the proportion of the neck is odd, it's looking like head is too forward. I suggest pushing neck back • the chin is too sharp, and it looks like the character doesn't have one, make it more curvy • i am feeling like eyes are too small, and too backward. The position of eyebags is wrong too. I tried to draw how it will look right Hope this helps♡´･ᴗ･`♡