The re draw was mostly just for me to get a feel of the anatomy. I think here proportions are a bit off. Her back needs to stick out more for sure. But ultimately I think the weight /fat is distributed unevenly. Like I think her arms are to this for how thick the rest of her is. I think alsoherhead could be bigger an torso longer.idk this could be a personal preference thing. But ultimately it feels like the proportions and weight are off. Like all her body part belong to different people. On the plus side, I love the face! Very cool style and expression
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super cute art! only aspects i would fix would be the arms and the torso so everything connects nicely
thank you for the feedback!
Good start here. I think a bit of practice with the figure mannequin and how the limbs attach to the torso and pelvis would be a great thing to work on to improve the fluidity of your figures. Hope this helps you with some items to keep practicing on as you are not far off.
thank you!
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anything i can fix ?
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