@silbrinn

“hope this helps a bit !! i mostly just moved stuff inwards and outwards and made the neck longer so the collarbone is visible”

“i really like the hand in this drawing! the highlights on it is super good as well :) hope the rest helps !”

“its a good start i would just add more flow to the pose and clothing i simplified the face a bit as it does help add that emotion i also made the hair a little lower down on her head and made the po”

“i would also make the background color a much darker color (close to black) so then the only thing that really is popping would be the girls”

“its a good start! i would for furries always show off their anatomy less as they do have fur the biggest thing i would work on for anatomy would be the neck, shoulders, arms, and top of torso”

“its a good start! i would focus on anatomy, colors, and adding a little more brightness to your character so they pop out more :)”

“super cute art! only aspects i would fix would be the arms and the torso so everything connects nicely”

“bright whites and yellowish colors can help with the bright sun feel, especially with water to make it feel more lively dark shadows would be where the sun doesnt hit i didnt add it but i would al”

“super good start! for lighting always know where your light source is coming from so you know how to shade using pinterest for references for the pose you want is always helpful as well!”

“i would embrace the creepy doll theme more, find references of dresses for dolls to fit the vibe and make the cracks black so theyre visible dull eyes add to that lifeless look as well”

“looks good so far! i would use a reference for the lighting you are wanting so you know where the shadows hit and where it would be brightest i changed the neck and torso a bit to align more with th”

“wasnt too sure how to incorporate skirt but i do think pants look nice for that elegant but intimidating feel :)”

“biggest thing would be picking where u want ur light coming from and go off of that darker areas would be where the light doesn’t hit”

“i would experiment with other eye shapes, add lines under the eyes and near the brows when needed and play with more expressive mouths”

“looks good so far! for clothes id add more variety to the colors and more layers rather than frills”

“face width looks fine, main issue is the top of the head is too large so id recommend shrinking it down :) keep the hair close to the base of the head”

“it looks super good i love the colors i would just change the neck placement because it is a little confusing and also just line stuff up a bit more”

“it looks super good! id add more shading and highlights especially on the face and eyes to help it pop out more”

“larger neck and move eyes nose and mouth towards center more! good start though :)”

“amazing drawing! i would just change the arm length and then shoulder and neck placement”

“drawing is super good! mostly just fixed the anatomy with the legs and torso :)”

“circles lines and squares help a lot when it comes to anatomy ! since he seems muscular id make the head smaller and chest, neck, and arms bigger to show that super good start though!”

“great start! a way to make him look more energetic would be to add to the pose dont be afraid to have a more square canvas so more can fit on it! hand on the hip, arm higher up and a happier facial ”

“i would make the eyes smaller and higher up face a little longer and shoulders more broad very nice start though!”